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- Purpose and Organization
- Evidence and Elaboration
- Conventions
Development of Opinion: Your use of evidence and reasoning
· Organization: How you structured your writing
· Language Use: Your word choice and sentence variety
What the Feedback Looks Like:
· Visual bars showing Approaching | Meets | Exceeds for each area
· Specific praise (e.g., "Great job taking a clear position!")
· Helpful suggestions (e.g., "Try adding more details from the passage")
REVISION LOOP
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· Improve your response based upon the feedback
The student can expand or collapse each category. Each category indicates a performance level of Emerging, Meets or Exceeds.
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Below the performance levels are comments and suggestions. Some provide the option to View Select Show in essay. By selecting, students can see the part(s) of their response specifically relevant to the feedback. Color-coding makes it easier to match comments and text. to see highlighted areas needing work.
The student can provide a thumbs up or thumbs down to provide feedback on the comments.
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