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- Purpose and Organization
- Evidence and Elaboration
- Conventions
Development of Opinion: Your use of evidence and reasoning
· Organization: How you structured your writing
· Language Use: Your word choice and sentence variety
What the Feedback Looks Like:
· Visual bars showing Approaching | Meets | Exceeds for each area
· Specific praise (e.g., "Great job taking a clear position!")
· Helpful suggestions (e.g., "Try adding more details from the passage")
REVISION LOOP
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· Improve your response based upon the feedback
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